The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/08
So sweet! Nice characterization too.
12/15/08
This reminds me of the kind of story I liked to read when I was a kid. I can see it being published in a Sunday School magazine. Very nice.
You do such a masterful job of telling a story through conversation. I'm impressed!
12/23/08
Moving story, and the girl's comments about the only time she heard Jesus name is so true, which makes it all the more tragic.