The Official Writing Challenge
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This is like a new Christmas story. Well written - interesting - I hope your efforts are rewarded. Thank you! Col.

New Year & Christmas Blessings!
This is an absolutely wonderful story. I, too, hope your efforts are rewarded. I love this line: Her words shook in the air, like a finger. Truly... 'a little child shall lead them.'
Your story is very believable and excellently written.