The Official Writing Challenge
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12/12/08
Nice job - enjoyed this modern Scrooge story! Thanks for sharing. Col. All the best for Christmas!
Delightful! I especially like this line, "it was a sincere hug that ran from the tips of her dainty little fingers to the deepest part of her Jesus-filled heart." This radiated such warmth and meaning.
12/16/08
Such a poignant picture, even with the word limit. I really liked this.
12/16/08
Wonderful writing! The simple 3rd paragraph - "It was the money" was shocking, and it set the character in stone for me. Great descriptions and word choices. You illustrated the topic to a tee.
12/17/08
Really good writing!
This is wonderful. Drew me in right away. Your characters were great. Just a great story all around. :)
Loved your characterization. Good writing.