The Official Writing Challenge
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12/06/08
Your title captured my attention. :) Your writing was excellent when you described driving on ice. The lesson is this is wonderful. What a creative way to teach this.
12/07/08
This was thoroughly enjoyable. I loved the little touches that added colour to your tale: the scent of nutmeg, the beauty of falling snow, the spray of cookie crumbs. I hope this does really well.
I liked the message here. Well written.