The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/05
Wow! A real heartbreaker.
Absolutely incredible, Loved it
07/25/05
Absolutely wonderful. You had my attention from the title. Great, great job!
07/25/05
Tnis is a well-written, touching story.
07/25/05
Wow, tough, a heart string puller. Great writing. Thanks.
Such a great job! The suspense just kept building as I tried to figure out your plot, then it all became so very clear. Very compelling.
07/26/05
Great title for a story like this. Very heart-breaking but very wise.
God bless ya, littlelight
07/27/05
Wow, this is awesome. Definitely one of my favorites. Good job!
07/28/05
Sad but oh so true. You did a good job on such a delicate subject. Well done.
I love the angle that you wrote this story on. Beautiful and touching. Thank you for sharing!
Nice work! You maintained the simplicity of the character's voice very well.
A stunner. I was hooked. This is among my favorites this week.
07/28/05
Excellent! Perfect twist on the theme
You hooked my heart right in the center! Excellent job!
07/30/05
Definately a top 8 in my book. Nice writing on a complex topic from a child's perspective. Always sad to see a marriage end.
07/31/05
This was so very well told from the child's perspective. A child would not understand the need to escape, or play a game of hide and seek, and you captured that beautifully.
08/02/05
Heart wrenching, layered story. The child's voice was consistent throughout. Great the way you bought all the threads of the story together through her narrative and the dialogue.