The Official Writing Challenge
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12/04/08
Great contrasting descriptions give this piece its emotional pull. What a day that must have been!
12/08/08
Really liked this one. I could just feel the knot in the MC's stomach, such great descriptions.
Those daunting first family gatherings.... ugh... I still cringe at the remembrance of my first with my husbands family.
This was perfect in description of the MC's trepidation.