The Official Writing Challenge
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How beautiful! God speaks to all who will listen - and their lives - regardless of their circumstances and in the most unexpected places -are changed forever.
This is well done. You didn't rush your story but allowed it to unfold in its own time, dropping in key info as the details unfolded. Likewise it came to a satisfactory conclusion, not an unbelievable instantaneous conversion but a slow, steady return to life and faith.
My one quibble would be that you introduced friend Dan as a strategic character in the story but then you failed to develop him. That said, the rest works well.
I like the way you developed this story. It held my attention, beginning to end.
I also liked the surprise entrance of Friend Dan who, it is presumed, showed her the door that lead to her "third life".