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I felt a stirring of mixed emotions as I read this. Sorry the MC didn't feel she could turn to family in her desperate situation, Happy she appeared to have found her daughter, and Hopeful that through this couple she would be able to turn her life around. Maybe I've suggested a sequel for you. Good job.
Excellent voice, and what an incredible story of hope. This blessed me.
Very touching story of loss, love and hope. Whether or not the child is hers, though I think it is, an offer of new beginnings are apparently on the horizon.
I'd love to read more.