The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/08
This was a lot of fun. Thanks for letting your creative juices flow.
Now this may just be me, but I got a little confused by the way that sometimes Laura was referred to in the third person and at other times you switched over into first person. Mind you, maybe it was deliberate. Either way an enjoyable read, one in which it was impossible to predict what was coming next - my favourite type of writing!
THis was fun to read.