The Official Writing Challenge
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12/04/08
Oh my! What an emotional turmoil. Excellent writing. Life brings us choices just like that. Well done.
12/04/08
Wow! Good job. You really hooked me with this one. I liked the ending too, not quite your happily ever after.
12/05/08
You brought out the difficulties and complexities and left the reader hanging out for more. Well written.
The MC shift in the third paragraph confused me a bit, (maybe a string of astericks to separate?).
However, this was a sad, yet very well told story.