The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 875 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
11/30/08
We have not because we ask not. Glad this mom had the where-withall to ask. I'm happy it your story ended well. Good job.
12/01/08
Nice lesson--sometimes we can't hear God until we're still.
Yes, maybe I could sense that they would find her in the end, but that didn't stop me from reading on to make sure. I was still very glad that this mom stopped to ask God for help and He answered. Very appropriate title too. :)
You caught me from the first. :) Well done. I really like how she was told by God to be still so she could hear what she needed to in order to find her daughter.

One typo: "grabbed her show" rather than "grabbed her shoe..." Too bad spell check doesn't catch those kind of mistakes, huh?