The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/08
Bummer of an ending. I have so been there. Loved your story but felt frustrated all the way through it.
11/30/08
I love the paragraph toward the end that begins with "Buying myself some time"...the names the narrator gives the ladies literally made me snort. (I'm a big fan of sarcasm). And I could totally relate with the last sentence! Hope he's got a forgiving wife...
This sounds like a nightmare! Excellent descriptions. I could feel his pain.
I agree with the nightmare comment. Kept thinking he would wake up. Poor Guy. Made for a good read though. :)
I loved the sarcasm, but most of all I loved the descriptions of the "congestion" in the first part of the stroy. As always, your writing is witty and smart!