The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, this was so wonderful. I love English stories. The voice was well-written and well-heard! it was so enjoyable to read. Great one!
11/30/08
Awesome story. Loved the corny elf jokes - and the black eye? In my book, you got half of what you deserved! :o)
12/01/08
Your last two paragraphs had me laughing out loud!
This was so much fun. I laughed while rolling my eyes and thinking "Isn't that just like a man." :)
This was such fun to read! Your style kept me completely hooked. The ending is great!
12/04/08
This was sooo funny, I laughed out loud, and then had to read it to my hubby in the other room. I loved it. I can just feel those cold hands!
12/04/08
Excellent, you had me with the first line and kept me giggling all the way through. Absolutely fantastic ending! Congrats on your EC - well deserved.
What a riot (and well deserved black eye). Congratulations on your creativity and EC!
12/04/08
Super creative! Congrats on your EC!
12/04/08
Oh, Gregory, if only you knew a pleasant MD at the time to help you out with that black eye! Perhaps the EC is of some consolation. Congrats!
12/05/08
Brilliant! Thanks for the laugh.