The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/05
Powerful entry! And I love that you saved the most significant detail for last! Great job!
07/18/05
I agree - this one packed a powerful punch. Unique twist on "camping."
Well done!
Blessings, Lynda
07/18/05
Very well done and unique.
wow- powerful, yet guided the reader along gently all the way to the punch!
07/19/05
Powerful exit-wow! From beginning to end, great story. Awesome truth. God bless, littlelight
07/20/05
Wow! This in my humble opinion is one of the best offerings for this subject. And the theme camping is a perfect fit. Thank you for sharing! I will have to dwell on "Why are you limiting me?" in my own personal struggles today.
07/22/05
The whole picture was challenging enough, but that last line gave me tingles. Well done!
Interesting twist! "Camp yourself in territories where the devil has the strongest hold...." Chilling. A well-told tale.
07/23/05
All caps are hard to read, a couple of grammar issues, but otherwise very touching. I have spent hundreds of hours working with prisoners, I know from where you speak. Thanks for posting.
What an interesting twist to the topic - but so thought provoking. Captured the reader's interest and emotions. Well done!
07/24/05
Fantastic. I'm encouraged to be His witness. I do not want to limit God.
07/24/05
A powerful story.