The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/08
Hmmm, excellent writing and good storytelling, except I missed where she got on a bus. Maybe it is implied but with the ending so open it should be there. Other than that it was very well done.
12/01/08
I'm so glad she is on the bus going home - yay!
12/02/08
It's amazing! There's something about seven years! It happens over and over again. Great story - caught the feelings beautifully.