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11/21/08
Ara does have a personality, and you did a great job showing it to us. I liked his travel across the sky with his friend help in guiding him. A delightfully fun and deeply meaningful piece.
11/22/08
Sweet, I enjoyed Ara's playfulness. Not too sure where the 'gift' comes in though.
11/24/08
Lovely perspective, and I love the personality! Enjoyed this.
11/25/08
Nice story, and fun to read. Light, but with a real truth buried inside.
11/26/08
Well done. This was entertaining and your bright shining little guy was a delight! Enjoyed it.
Beautiful story. Well done.
Love,
Norms
11/27/08
An very interesting read. I like the star's POV in this story. You have captured the essence of the gift in leading people to the Christ Child.