The Official Writing Challenge
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11/24/08
A good story of a man so much in love. A nice gift for the beautiful lady,
(a diamond ring)

Have a very Merry Christmas.
11/27/08
Mary Alice,
This is a pretty story, and (except for para 5, which is quite 'grown-up') is very expressive of a small child talking. I do hope they all lived happily ever after. God bless you.