The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/08
That Vernon! He made me smile. :) Your story was amusing and fun to read. The beginning paragraph isn't a real "grabber" but it turns into a good story. And I'm not sure what you meant by "you-know-what-kind-of-laugh" so naturally I didn't get the meaning of the MC's "me too" in the last line either. Probably just me. I like the voice - so natural. I enjoyed this!
11/22/08
This was so much fun that I got ahead of myself in my imagination. I was half expecting to read that Charlie Horse was proudly showing off his new set of dentures!
11/24/08
Just delightful. I have to say I was expecting a DIFFERENT horse in that barn than Charlie. Love both characters.
11/25/08
I love it all!