The Official Writing Challenge
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This was great! So creative and humorous, too.
Such fun! I loved it!
Too cute! A very fun read.
Fun and creative. I think Julie got just what she deserved. ;)
Cute and fun. Enjoyed the personalities especially.
I absolutely adore this. It's clever, humorous and creative. The idea of Julie honking made me chuckle. Five big, fat stars from me.
Silly Goose is right! This was great fun to read.
The animal character's voices fit them to a "tee". Silly Julie! What a clever ending, too. Fun read for a snowy pre-Thanksgiving morning!
This is so very precious and with a moral to boot! :)
What great dialogue and personalities! Love the humor, too.
LOL! This was a blast to read, and I am sure it was a hoot to write. Thanks for the smile on my face...loved this.
What a fun, delightful, creative story! Thanks for the laugh.
You always write such fun stories involving animals. This almost reminds me of a Charlotte's Web type story, only much funnier. I loved the part about the pigeon scratch and hen scratch. Very fun story with a great ending! :)
This made me laugh! The dialogue was wonderful, and the personalities came through. Congrats on your 3rd place win!
This needs to be illustrated. I could just see this all unfolding, thanks to your wonderful descriptions. Congratulations on your EC!