The Official Writing Challenge
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11/20/08
This was great! So creative and humorous, too.
Such fun! I loved it!
11/23/08
Too cute! A very fun read.
11/23/08
Fun and creative. I think Julie got just what she deserved. ;)
11/23/08
Cute and fun. Enjoyed the personalities especially.
I absolutely adore this. It's clever, humorous and creative. The idea of Julie honking made me chuckle. Five big, fat stars from me.
11/25/08
Silly Goose is right! This was great fun to read.
11/26/08
The animal character's voices fit them to a "tee". Silly Julie! What a clever ending, too. Fun read for a snowy pre-Thanksgiving morning!
This is so very precious and with a moral to boot! :)
What great dialogue and personalities! Love the humor, too.
11/26/08
LOL! This was a blast to read, and I am sure it was a hoot to write. Thanks for the smile on my face...loved this.
What a fun, delightful, creative story! Thanks for the laugh.
You always write such fun stories involving animals. This almost reminds me of a Charlotte's Web type story, only much funnier. I loved the part about the pigeon scratch and hen scratch. Very fun story with a great ending! :)
11/27/08
This made me laugh! The dialogue was wonderful, and the personalities came through. Congrats on your 3rd place win!
This needs to be illustrated. I could just see this all unfolding, thanks to your wonderful descriptions. Congratulations on your EC!