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That is a lovely story for the Christmas Season. Merry Christmas and thank you. J
11/24/08
This is such heartwarming and tender story for the Christmas season. Being a cat lover, I loved the gift of baby kittens. :)
11/25/08
You set the scene of emotional deprivation masterfully. The line about the children's stomachs growling in tandem was almost physically painful. And then all the tension melted away as love and tenderness entered their lives. What amazing wisdom the foster mother showed in bringing in the kittens. I loved this. Thanks for writing.
11/27/08
Marlene, in case you don't see the Highest Rankings each week, I just wanted to let you know that you did very well in the Challenge this week. Even though you didn't quite make it into the winners' circle, you made it into the highest rankings for Level 3, placing 13th for the level.

The competition is always extremely intense in Level 3, so well done. Keep up the great writing.

If you would like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can see them here:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=343147

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)