The Official Writing Challenge
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11/23/08
I like this. At first reading I thought it was maybe a bit too intelligent, but then I realized that your character was a "learned" man. His musings were fun to follow. Well done.
11/23/08
I love the voice and your word choices. Your writing was like music to my ears. A wonderful telling of this ancient tale.
11/23/08
Wonderful descriptions, and a wonderful retelling. This was an absolute pleasure to read.
You have a marvelous gift with words. I reveled in the beautiful way you retold this story.
11/25/08
This shines as brightly as that long ago star. Well done.
Picturesque portrait of this historical event. Enjoyed the thoughts of your character. :)