The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this. At first reading I thought it was maybe a bit too intelligent, but then I realized that your character was a "learned" man. His musings were fun to follow. Well done.
I love the voice and your word choices. Your writing was like music to my ears. A wonderful telling of this ancient tale.
Wonderful descriptions, and a wonderful retelling. This was an absolute pleasure to read.
You have a marvelous gift with words. I reveled in the beautiful way you retold this story.
This shines as brightly as that long ago star. Well done.
Picturesque portrait of this historical event. Enjoyed the thoughts of your character. :)