The Official Writing Challenge
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Love this story from the very beginning. Such a pretentious, yet adorable, girl. I love how her disability didn't stop her one bit! :)
I liked this. You stated her frustrations well and addressed both the issues of "safety" on the parents part and the longing for "independence" in the child. Very good.
Dolores, in case you don't see the Highest Rankings each week, I just wanted to let you know that you did very well in the Challenge this week. Even though you didn't quite make it into the winners' circle, you made it into the highest rankings for Level 3, placing 8th for the level. You also made it into the Highest Rankings overall, placing 32nd out of all the entries for the week.

The competition is always extremely intense in Level 3, so well done. Keep up the great writing.

If you would like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can see them here:

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)