The Official Writing Challenge
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Aw, I just want to hug your MC. You made me love him. :)
11/24/08
I like the image of how they worked together, "like a video in fast-forward." :) I love the acronym for LIAM and then Liam's version. :) Nice story!
11/25/08
This is a very precious story. The 'name change' from Loser is a Muttonhead, to Living in a Miracle, was priceless; exactly what the child needed to start living with confidence. Some nice turns of phrase (the cold blowing in along with the tasty dishes) and the one-sided phone conversation was handled well. There was one rather unfortunate typo which your spell check missed...
11/27/08
Oh, wow, "Living in a Miracle." What a great idea. How beautiful. I know a very special child named Liam, and now I have a very special name to go with him each Sunday I see him at church. Thank you!