The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/05
Wonderful and engaging entry! Loved every word!
07/20/05
Very well written. Delightful. God bless ya, littlelight
Nice job, and a good reminder that the simple things are often the most rewarding. Favorite line: "There, before my eyes, the barrier of Playstation cables, work-induced weariness, and the struggle to survive in our fast-paced world, simply melted away. Boy and man met in a magical place."
07/23/05
Well written, a little confusing for me following the dialogue in the beginning but the essay smoothed out to a wonderful piece. Thanks.
07/23/05
A well written story that epitomises what we really want to happen on those camping trips.
07/24/05
A very nicely written story of a wonderful family momment.