The Official Writing Challenge
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11/22/08
Oh, do I EVER love the voice of this! I can just hear the dialog in my ear--perhaps a southern accent?

Enjoyed this. Lots!
I loved your tongue-in-cheek humor in your delightful story.
11/25/08
Details, details! I need to know why your MC was done with men, where Phil fits into the picture prior to his unexpected appearance in the place of a word processor—there has to be a longer article, a sequel, a book in here some place. Very good.