The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/08
Sweet and lovely, with an incredible truth to finish up with. Love all the detail.
11/22/08
Beautiful, simple and to-the-point. Loved it.
I enjoyed the pictures your poetry made for me.
11/29/08
The last line didn't make much sense but a somewhat lyrical flow, needs a little work.