The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/08
Great forgiveness, love, family, and a hint of romance. What more could one need in a Christmas card story? Good work....
11/15/08
Lots of description to help the reader get inside the story. There are some typos that can easily be corrected, especially in one of the last paragraphs. Nice job.