The Official Writing Challenge
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11/13/08
Oh boy, how I love the humor in this one. You made me laugh so many times. :)
Oh, poor Maddie! She had it so wrong but she sure was committed to her misconception. I'm not sure if I should laugh at her or cry for her. Well told and a different approach to the topic.
I love the irony in your ending. Your story makes an excellent point, too.
11/17/08
hehe - what an ending! I could feel her desire for perfection, and her frustration and triumph as she finished. Great characters!