The Official Writing Challenge
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11/13/08
Beautifully creative and heart-warming.
How original and delightful! I liked these characters and their interaction.
I love this story! It's definitely a unique take on the topic, and you tie up all the ends, while still making it believable. Great job!
11/17/08
SO original, and great characterization with an engaging story. Lovely!
11/17/08
What a wonderful story—not only well-written but it exudes the spirit of Christmas.
11/17/08
Clever piece with a heartwarming story line. Well done.
11/17/08
This was an excellent story, loved the writing, loved the MC and how she turned everything around.
How cool that a radio station got involved in helping George. This story is what Christmas is really all about.
11/22/08
Excellent! From getting rid of the yobs to sending out the text message, to using George as the subject of her Christmas cards, the MC radiates love and grace, and lifts the dignity of a man who has been too much walked over. And that is what redemption is all about! Beautiful!