The Official Writing Challenge
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This story is so touching. I appreciated the way Tim reached out to his defiant brother. And his love, which which mirrors the love of Christ, melted George's hardened heart. Good lesson.
I like the greeting card writing angle, and especially the reconciliation at the end.
You've said a lot within the word limit, giving us good insights into these brothers' lives and relationship. Good job.
11/19/08
This was very original. Good writing!
11/21/08
I like how you stepped out of the box (Josh-wise) with this entry. Nice work! A very good message. :)