The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful message...one typo that's easy to fix, the D in CARD was followed with another D for Divine...good job.
11/18/08
This was a creative spin to the topic. Next time you could elaborate a little more. Try to use more of your word count. Good job.
Very creative; and I loved the message through out - especially the way you summed it up in your closing paragraph.
11/19/08
There were a couple of typos that I found distracting--'harolding' should be 'heralding' and 'sheprerds' should be 'shepherds'--but the message is beautiful. I also wasn't quite sure if there was a cadence or not.