The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved this! [snif] excellent! Especially love the knickname, it makes the story very real.
I hate being such a sap! I'm crying -- this is really well done!
I love it! This message of hope and healing through forgiveness is one that touches all of us. Great work Champ!
Great story! Loved how God spoke to Madison and confirmed what God was doing in her life.
God bless ya, littlelight
Good job! This was the first time I read a Challenge entry that actually... ahem... kind of touched me emotionally. That's a big deal for me! You've done well with this story. It's powerful!
A sad, but common, situation for lots of young people. You bought two lots of hope into her life in this well crafted and believable story.
Beautiful. My life has been significantly impracted through Christian camps too, plus I've done my share of working at them too.

Love the way Madison 'stalks' into the kitchen - says it all at the beginning, and contrasts so beautifully with the end.

Well done!
I know the feelings of despair & hopelessness Maddie felt. Your story was beautifully written and believable. Very well done!
Blessings, Lynda
Great message, nicely stated. Thanks.
I really like the way you developed this. A very touching story.
I was riveted from beginning to end! I could feel the emotions of all the characters and loved the descriptions throughout! Thanks.
A sad story (that happens all too often) but this one ends with hope.