The Official Writing Challenge
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Ohhh - I was not expecting that ending. You did a very nice job with putting us in the MC's head.
You may have strayed from the topic just a tad, but who cares? The story was excellent and the ending better than I could have imagined.
Loved the humor and the ending was terrific!
Cute story...I had a feeling the kids sent out the cards but wasn't sure if they screwed up or not. I'm glad they did a good job. The MC was blessed.
I love those kids and that husband. Bless them for pitching in and making Christmas for mom. Great job!