The Official Writing Challenge
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11/13/08
This all-dialog piece is well done. I was never confused as to who was speaking, no tags were necessary to show emotion or action, and the characterization was good to boot. It was also engaging and fun - I'll be looking closely at all the photos this year. :) And I wanted to know what the "expert" said about the dinner theme. :)
11/14/08
Oh, what a riot! You did an incredible job with characterization through dialog - not so easy. Enjoyed this.
11/15/08
LOL. Loved it!

“Perish the thought. All right, then the cards will just say Merry Christmas, then.”

Exactly. Too cute, and the title is perfect.
11/16/08
Hopefully one of the topics will be 'Christmas Dinner' so we can hear the rest of this discussion! Very original and entertaining.
11/16/08
And I never knew that taking a picture could be so complicated … Love the title, too.
11/16/08
I'm planning my card theme as we speak ... isn't everyone? Very creative writing ... your cards muct open from the top!
11/18/08
Even without the expert we all manage to do that to some extent, don't we? Very creative. Now I'll reread for the nuances.