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11/06/08
This is marvelous!
11/06/08
Great take on the topic and effective format. Excellent ending!
This is absolutely lovely in imagery and message--well worth a second and third read.
11/07/08
Definitely something worth a long drink here--something to read slowly and bite into from time to time.
11/10/08
Oh, I really love the descriptions and imagery--and especially the message. Lovely.
Very well written and thought provoking, especially Christmas Future. Great job!
11/10/08
Your word choices and phrases are always so perfect. This really captured me, "Twinkling stars reflect in donkey’s brass and cow’s bell." I LOVE your ending and anticipate THAT day. This is so wonderful!
11/11/08
Excellent work! A neat cross between poetry and prose....and the content is very true to reality. Nice job.
11/13/08
Congrats on 8th place overall and your Editor's Choice!!! Doin a happy dance for you!
11/13/08
Yay! Congrats Sharlyn on having these thought high-LIGHTed! :)
11/14/08
Congratulations, Sharlyn! This is excellent--lovely comparisons here.