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Oh man. This is very good. You certainly pointed out the real person who was missing Christmas. Good job.
I liked this, a nil hypothesis - well written.
This is very well written. I just wish that Don came up with an idea to help this poor family. Well Done!
I sense a little Christ-missing here, as they Focus on the Contest, and the lights, they forgot The Light.
You certainly evoked emotion in this reader. Such a creative take on Christmas lights. I appreciate your irony here, "I find it amazing that someone can totally miss out on the real joys of the Christmas season.”
Well done, but I hoped until the last line that a happy ending was in store...