The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/08
Beautiful descriptions. I could picture it all so clearly. This felt a touch weak on topic, but I certainly enjoyed it.
11/10/08
I loved your descriptions.

I would have made it a bit longer, and as mentioned, it felt a bit weak on topic.

I loved your paragraph about the cold and flu bugs! Made me laugh.
This is well written.
11/26/08
Fabulous powers of description in the opening paragraphs!