The Official Writing Challenge
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11/06/08
This is a cute story that illustrates how important communiction is in any relationship. Fit the topic and was glad it had a happy ending.
You made Erma and Bubba so real that I wanted them to make their marriage work--looks like they were going to!
11/07/08
Aw. What a hoot! Funny, funny, funny, and great descriptions to boot.:)
11/09/08
SO cute! Enjoyed the dialog especially. Fun piece.
Cute story! You made Erma and Bubba come alive.
This is so cute. You had me laughing out loud with Bubba's What's? I loved the ending and am glad they got back together. Thanks for making me smile :-)
11/10/08
Yes, I remember that song! ...and I love your happy ending!
11/11/08
LOL I loved this one! So cute!
11/11/08
Ahh... love the ending!
I like how you used facial expressions to tell so much.