The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/08
This poem flowed very well. Well-done but maybe a little light on the topic. Very good, though.
I really like this poem and it shows how we as the children of the most high God should let our lights shine at all times.
We should be this way all the year round, not only at Christmas. Thank you for writing this beautiful Poem.
11/13/08
Your meter is excellent in this poem of beautiful thoughts. I LOVE this, "A privilege, yes, thatís what it would be,
In service to You, illuminate me." Very nicely done!