The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/08
Very creative. Nice job.
I like how the angels described the lights, and especially Jesus as the light of the world. And I liked the end, where the people with the cross on their roof prayed for their loved ones who didn't know Jesus. Nice Job!
11/11/08
You approached the topic well. I would have liked to feel more in the action rather than as a casual observer....that's just my HO. Good writing, though!
11/12/08
I love this approach. Found it a bit more "telly" than you usually do, but I still enjoyed it!