The Official Writing Challenge
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11/06/08
Woo hoo, this is awesome! I tried a sestina once, and they're HARD. I kept wanting to give mine a meter, and I chose difficult words for my end-worlds. But you've done a GREAT job. I love your enjambment, and the baby lamb imagery in the first third or so (awesome!), and the questions toward the end. It's just lovely all around, and a masterpiece of wordsmanship.
Your beautiful poem is executed perfectly. I loved the comparison of the babes--sheep and human. Masterful writing.
Very impressive! More than that, however, your poem is rich in content and meaning. Fabulous!
11/07/08
Kudos for your skill displayed in this wonderful poem. Beautiful message!
11/08/08
Wonderful message with excellent use of poetic devices. Enjoyed this.
Wow. This is excellent. Great writing, great message!
Wow, what can i say, but give my homage to a true master of the language and the many, varied and beautiful ways it can communicate.

Loren