The Official Writing Challenge
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Woo hoo, this is awesome! I tried a sestina once, and they're HARD. I kept wanting to give mine a meter, and I chose difficult words for my end-worlds. But you've done a GREAT job. I love your enjambment, and the baby lamb imagery in the first third or so (awesome!), and the questions toward the end. It's just lovely all around, and a masterpiece of wordsmanship.
Your beautiful poem is executed perfectly. I loved the comparison of the babes--sheep and human. Masterful writing.
Very impressive! More than that, however, your poem is rich in content and meaning. Fabulous!
Kudos for your skill displayed in this wonderful poem. Beautiful message!
Wonderful message with excellent use of poetic devices. Enjoyed this.
Wow. This is excellent. Great writing, great message!
Wow, what can i say, but give my homage to a true master of the language and the many, varied and beautiful ways it can communicate.