The Official Writing Challenge
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HA! This is so good. The description of pappa was well done. I held my breath wondering if he was going to finally see the "light" but was afraid it was going to tbe on the other side. Nice way of bringing it all together at the end. A lesson with humor is always a pleasure to read. God bless! I enjoyed this alot!!
11/06/08
I truly enjoyed this fun story. Poppa's character pulled me in and I smiled at the calmness of the preacher as he was about to "save" him after the shock. Good tone, mood and loved the voice of the MC.
11/07/08
I love your play on words to the song title. Your story is very creative. Great writing.
11/07/08
A great piece of descriptive writing with highly enjoyable humor.
11/08/08
Great writing. I love the way you capture the simple, good, old-fashioned joy of preparing for Christmas. Glad it all worked out well in the end
11/08/08
Incredibly alive, engaging piece (I have a guess who wrote this, but I could, of course, be wrong. Fun and delightful and SO easy to picture.
This story is loaded wth description and fun, fun fun!
This well-written piece was a lot of fun to read. Great characterizations!