The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/08
This is very well written. Good job. I was bummed along with you that the lights were stolen.
The whole neighborhood could possibly be changed next time we hear from them. The light of Jesus works great changes!
Nice writing.
11/10/08
Good job writing this. I was hoping, against hope, that the final line would have the lights returned, but Christ's light is a better ending.
This is a very well written reminder to stay focused on the light, when darkness wants to cloud our judgement. Great job!
11/11/08
I pray that the hearts of the thieves will be turned to Christ. Keep shining the light!
11/17/08
Your writing is so well-thought-out. Despite the violation of your lives, you have hope. I like this ending "the lights are gone from the tree, but the Light still shines in our lives."