The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/05
What a light, fun read! I enjoyed this one all the way through. Loved the "ah ha!" moment at the end. Well done!
Blessings, Lynda
07/19/05
It's almost like poetry with the 'Why do we do this?' between each stanza! And of course, that great resolution - 'This is why we do this.' Beautiful!
07/20/05
Nicely done. Although I haven't actually been on a family camping outing, it all seemed familiar somehow. Nice wrap up at the end.
07/20/05
That was that cute, and hilarious ending again. Makes me laugh. Delightful and witty. God bless ya, littlelight
Excellent work! I laughed all the way through with you and loved the ending.
very enjoyabel!
07/22/05
And don't forget the can opener! I always find the first night is the worst, when it comes to camping! Thankyou for reminding me why we do do it!
07/22/05
Very entertaining, but very realistic. I really enjoyed your article.
07/22/05
A fun read. Very enjoyable. Thanks.
07/22/05
Lovely, funny, insight into what it is to be a mum on a camping trip.
(Watch out for tense chages: 'walked away'.
07/24/05
Nicely written and it reminds me of the trip we took last year -very last minute, and I forgot potholders and cooking utensils. I'll never forget the sight of watching my hubby cooking scrambled eggs with a plastic fork and a towel to get his much needed coffee pot off the fire.
07/26/05
Delightful read!
11/03/05
Hi Hope. I'm just preparing the new FaithWriters' Anthology and need a short (two to three sentences) bio piece to include in a new section for the book - "Meet Our Authors." The bio notes need to be written in the third person. Could you please send it to me via a Private Message? Thanks so much. Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)