The Official Writing Challenge
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11/06/08
I really like this, letting the lights draw Joe to Christ. Good job.
11/08/08
I agree with Carole... beautiful use of the lights.
I love how both wives loved Christmas. And how going back to his old home where his old life was, he was being led to his new home, and new life. Wonderfully written. Great job!
Beautiful! Tears are filling my eyes, sure hope you have Kleenex to email us.:0) Very touching story and I like your description and dialogue, they both flow and "shine".--(the name of my title for this entry,grin.)