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11/06/08
What a precious memory--this sounds like it must be true. You need to do a sequel and let your readers know if Hiram married the mom.
11/10/08
Yes, indeed a sweet story that reads like a memory. A little confusion as the little girl is pretending to be asleep in Hiram's arms at the end of prayer meeting and the next paragraph they're all walking. I especially loved the descriptions in the opening scene.
What a sweet memory! I'm happy for mom that she is finding love again. Nicely done!
11/19/08
Stop the suspense, Mary, did Hiram marry your Mom? Even if this is just a story - please tell!

Very good story from a childs POV. Thanks.