The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/08
This is a nice little story but you left us hanging with the boyfriend:) Maybe you can finish this up with more words after the challenge. So glad Elizabeth was able to decorate the tree.
11/10/08
Good story but the last paragraph is a bit awkward. You repeat, "for there on top of the tree." Maybe the second reference could read, "there in it's place of honor." (My daddy's ornaments all go near the top of the tree.) You got me missing Elizabeth's dad as well--good job.