The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this wonderful story of love and forgiveness. It showed a real Child of the King!
What a wonderful story for Christmas or any other time! I enjoyed the way the Bible scriptures where woven into the story.
11/10/08
Good story, one we all should do our best to replay as often as needed. Good writing, too
I loved this story, especially the way you spread scripture messages throughout. I love how it was Frank and Alice who stopped to help them. And the Lord works in mysterious ways. Great job!
11/10/08
Very good story with scripture woven in. I'm not sure Frank, who loved Christmas, would've grunted his response about going out to fix the lights. Overall I enjoyed it, even if I was disappointed at the minister's response.
11/12/08
Great story of Good Samaritan rewritten for Christmas modern day! I LOVE any kind of love of enemies story turned into redemption.. Great idea and excellent execution!
Well written story. I like the scriptures woven in ... an enjoyable read
11/13/08
So creative, and with a message that tweaks conviction in the heart. Well done!