The Official Writing Challenge
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You presented your characters strongly in verse--not an easy thing to do! And then you hit us with your message. Well done.
11/07/08
Loved it!
11/07/08
Hahaha. Oh you bad writer exposing people's sins like that, but how I enjoyed it!
11/08/08
Excellent characterization, a wonderful meter, and a surprising and important message. Wow.
This is an engaging, well-constructed poem, and with a great message, too!
11/11/08
Wow, wonderful form and skill displayed. I love your internal rhyme. Your message is convicting.
Wonderful! An enjoyable read.