The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/08
Unique approach to the topic. Lots of atmosphere descriptions and back-story history, but I didn't "feel" the emotion a story like this could evoke. Many great timely messages here.
11/02/08
This is wonderfully descriptive. I felt like I was right there with her. Very compelling.
11/03/08
'Pins and needles in my heart' What a wonderful expression! A very good description of the downward slide that leads to a bankrupt life. I felt the upward turn was a bit too sudden to ring true, but maybe the healing had already begun and she hadn't really noticed.
11/03/08
Pins and needles is exactly what my limbs feel like when waking up after circulation was cut off.
Great job, and wonderful ending.
11/06/08
Beautiful. I'm misty-eyed. You're writing always touches my heart!(And Congrats on your EC)
11/13/08
Very emotional piece that points us to choices and how they affect how lives as well as others. Congratulations on your EC.